Bar 14 - simplify

1 The Vagabond/music/guitar.ly

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ posI = \markup \small \bold "I"
 posII = \markup \small \bold "II"
 posIII = \markup \small \bold "III"
 posIV = \markup \small \bold "IV"
-posVI = \markup \small \bold "VI"
+posVII = \markup \small \bold "VII"
 
 ottavaStart = {
   \set Staff.ottavation = #"8vb"
@@ -34,12 +34,12 @@ guitarDynamics = {
 
 }
 
-leftHand = \relative c, {
+leftHand = \relative c {
   \set fingeringOrientations = #'(left)
 
   \barNumberCheck #1
   <<
-    { <e-0 b'-1>4-.^\posII <fis-1 b-1>-. <e b'>-. <fis b>-. | }
+    { <b e>4-.^\posVII <b fis'>-. <b e>4-. <b fis'>-. | }
 
     \new Staff \with {
       \remove "Time_signature_engraver"
@@ -48,9 +48,16 @@ leftHand = \relative c, {
       firstClef = ##f
       \clef "treble_8"
     }
-    \relative c { <b e>4-. <b fis'>-. <b e>4-. <b fis'>-. | }
+    \relative c, {
+      %% FIXME - either the sharp sign is displayed or (if I add a
+      %% \key) a key signature is displayed
+      %% \key e \minor
+      <e-0 b'-1>4-.^\posII^"orig." <fis-1 b-1>-. <e b'>-. <fis b>-. |
+    }
   >>
-  \repeat unfold 3 { <e b'>4-. <fis b>-. <e b'>-. <fis b>-. | }
+  <b e>4-. <b fis'>-. <b e>4-. <b fis'>-. |
+  <e,-0 b'-1>4-.^\posII <fis b>-. <e b'>-. <fis b>-. |
+  <e b'>4-. <fis b>-. <e b'>-. <fis b>-. |
   \repeat unfold 2 { <e b' e>4-. <fis b>-. <e b'>-. <fis b>-. | }
 
   \barNumberCheck #7 % Give to me the life I love
@@ -86,7 +93,7 @@ rightHand = \relative c' {
   r2 \tuplet 3/2 { e4-. g8-. } \tuplet 3/2 { b4-. b8-. } |
   b2 r |
   r \tuplet 3/2 { e,,4-. g8-. } \tuplet 3/2 { b4-. b8-. } |
-  b2.\( <d a fis>4^\posII \) |
+  b2.\( <d a fis>4 \) |
   \break
   <e b g>1^\posI |
   q |
@@ -105,7 +112,7 @@ rightHand = \relative c' {
 
   \barNumberCheck #13 % Bed in the bush with stars to see
   <g bes,>4-. q8-. <g a,>-. <g bes,>4 <g bes,> |
-  <f c aes>4. <c g>8 <aes f>4 <bes des,> |
+  <f c aes>4. c8 <aes f>4 <bes des> |
 
   \barNumberCheck #15 % Bread I dip in the river
   <c ees>4 <c aes'>8 <bes g'> <c aes'>4 <d f aes d> |