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@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ concluded that this was "not good". St'Wek started ripping at the plant to
get it off the ship, but as he brought one down another sprung from the
ground. He made a sarcastic comment. They reentered the ship and broke off the
plant invasion by withdrawing from the surface. Xēcnes explained that the
plants had eaten parts on the ship somehow. Analyzing a dead part of rank
plants had eaten parts of the ship somehow. Analyzing a dead part of rank
hanging onto the Haven's window, Xēcnes also concluded that the brown
substance leaking out of its torn off body was the fuel we had detected on
the planet.

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@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ Fetching Captain's Log excerpt...
Captain's log, Earth time 2312-09-19T20:19:36Z.
After much pestering by Xēcnes we are proceeding to a region of
space that could supposedly hold some answers regaring the
space that could supposedly hold some answers regarding the
Lovelace's little stray tour.
Xec believes to have discovered some strange readings thereabouts
that show similarities to the alien technology on board.
@ -184,7 +184,7 @@ I listened to his tale with all the patience you can expect of a girl,
noted how it was very interesting but I would rather like to leave
with my friends now, thanks.
My reasonable host reasonably denied my request and reasonably
reqiured me to walk about in the city and hold a little speach about
required me to walk about in the city and hold a little speach about
the things to come and maybe even about how great a leader The Autho-
rity was, before he would leave us all go, promise.
I was no fan of this idea but it seemed a small price to pay to
@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ culture, I think you should know you're not being treated fairly."
I sneered. "I'd like to see this planet that manages to keep such
a system in place without ultimately collapsing under chaos and depleted
resources."
Xēcnes stared into space and mumbled. "Wouldn't that be nice."
Xēcnes stared into space and mumbled. "Yes, that would be nice."
"The easiest way to keep you living a life you don't want is to have
you believe that you have no choice", said the tall, silent man in
@ -285,7 +285,7 @@ took place during the dark hours for these noctural locals.
Thus we had no choice but to work in one of the gigantic factories
around which the tall living complexes with their tiny appartments
were built. Oliz showed us where we could work and we set about doing
so without any employment process beyond recieving a chip for
so without any employment process beyond receiving a chip for
clocking in and out.
It was exhausting. Watching Oliz, who was bigger but much softer and
@ -296,8 +296,8 @@ St'Wek had much less problems with the physical aspects of this work
than me, but it did bring up unpleasant memories for him.
He said nothing throughout the whole night, which in itself was a
sign of just how uncomfortable he felt, that he should not even
complain, a thing that he loved to do as much and as often
as he could.
complain (a thing that he loved to do as much and as often
as he could).
As we exited the complex the rising sun tinted the dark red night
sky bright purple. The gentle sun beams reflected off each metal