About page public domain wording change

README

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 # WhisperMaPhone
+"I will call you by Whisper-ma-Phone, for the secrets I tell are for your ears alone."
+ - The Once-ler, *The Lorax*
 
 ## Copyright
 

thoughts/templates/thoughts/about.gmi

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 If you realize that you’re dying, they only thing to do is turn back toward your childhood. Oh so many people don’t realize, or realize too late. I saw a man getting a transfusion of blood. Though it was necessary to keep him alive, the pain of having it injected into him incapacitated him.
 
-This is WhisperMaPhone. It’s a tool I created to share my thoughts.
-=> https://tildegit.org/matthias/WhisperMaPhone The source code of WhisperMaPhone, released into the public domain.
-If you’re interested in setting up a page similar to this, let me know.
+This is free and unencumbered software released into the public domain.
+=> https://tildegit.org/matthias/WhisperMaPhone This is WhisperMaPhone
+It’s a tool I created to share my thoughts. If you’re interested in setting up a page similar to this, let me know.
 
 “Our brains are dulled by the incurable mania of wanting to make the unknown known, classifiable. The desire for analysis wins out over the sentiments.”
 
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 This is poetry, this is all poetry, and if you haven’t figured that out by now, then I’m probably not that interested in listening to you, so you shouldn’t feel any obligation to listen to me. This is the poetry of a broken generation. Of a generation that is as broken as any that came before it, and yet feels the pain of brokenness just as strongly as any others.
 
-Pray with me. “The Lord is close to the brokenhearted and saves those who are crushed in spirit.” The LORD is close to me. The LORD is close to me. The LORD is close to me. The LORD is close to me. The LORD is close to me. The LORD is close to me. The LORD is close to me. The LORD is close to me. The LORD is close to me. 
+Pray with me. “The Lord is close to the brokenhearted and saves those who are crushed in spirit.” The LORD is close to me. The LORD is close to me. The LORD is close to me. The LORD is close to me. The LORD is close to me. The LORD is close to me. The LORD is close to me. The LORD is close to me. The LORD is close to me.
 
 This website is a prayer.
 

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     <p class="text">
-        This is WhisperMaPhone. It’s a tool I created to share my thoughts.
-        It is public domain code available <a href="https://tildegit.org/matthias/WhisperMaPhone">here</a>.
+        This is free and unencumbered software released into the public domain.<br>
+        This is <a href="https://tildegit.org/matthias/WhisperMaPhone">WhisperMaPhone</a>. It’s a tool I created to share my thoughts.
         If you’re interested in setting up a page similar to this, let me know.
     </p>