README: language proofreading

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# Configuration
The configuration is done in two part, system wide to configure the
The configuration is done in two parts, system wide to configure the
**impermanence** service that will mount the memory filesystem and
populate it.
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The restart parameter to the service will unmount the device and
recreate it, allowing a fresh restart.
This is a bad idea to use it while the user is connected.
It is a bad idea to use while the user is connected.
## start
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Umount the home filesystem.
This is a bad idea to use it while the user is connected.
It is a bad idea to use while the user is connected.
## status
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(excluding the symbolic links) and order them by date of change.
This can be done with `find -x ~/ -type f -exec ls -altr {} +`, the
last files are the most recently modified one.
last files are the most recently modified.
## Beware file loss
When using this way of life, you need to remember every changes
that doesn't belong in the persistent areas will be lost. For
example, this will happen for every new files or directories at the
When using this way of life, you need to remember all changes
that don't belong in the persistent areas will be lost. For
example, this will happen for all new files or directories at the
root of your $HOME.
Impermanence requires the user to be aware of what files must stay
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make a long list and require a few guess&fix sessions to get the
things right.
The less the directories are at the top level, the more you will
The less directories are at the top level, the more you will
pinpoint the exact configuration you want to keep over time.
## Restarting impermanence