From be4d39de275d5ee5e79068eee738600f56ed646e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pamela Date: Wed, 5 Jan 2022 12:56:51 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] proofreading --- issues/issue-6/20_CURRENT.html | 4 ++-- issues/issue-6/30_STABLE.html | 2 +- issues/issue-6/50_TIPS.html | 8 ++++---- issues/issue-6/70_LINKS.html | 2 +- issues/issue-6/80_ARTWORK.html | 4 ++-- issues/issue-6/95_REDACTION.html | 2 +- issues/issue-6/99_AUTHORS.html | 2 +- 7 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) diff --git a/issues/issue-6/20_CURRENT.html b/issues/issue-6/20_CURRENT.html index 22cf15b..f780f96 100644 --- a/issues/issue-6/20_CURRENT.html +++ b/issues/issue-6/20_CURRENT.html @@ -2,9 +2,9 @@

Recent -current changes

diff --git a/issues/issue-6/30_STABLE.html b/issues/issue-6/30_STABLE.html index e981acc..70de5b9 100644 --- a/issues/issue-6/30_STABLE.html +++ b/issues/issue-6/30_STABLE.html @@ -3,6 +3,6 @@

7.0-stable updates (since last webzine issue)

diff --git a/issues/issue-6/50_TIPS.html b/issues/issue-6/50_TIPS.html index 0d28279..453dded 100644 --- a/issues/issue-6/50_TIPS.html +++ b/issues/issue-6/50_TIPS.html @@ -2,14 +2,14 @@

Shell tips

- Did you know your shell had keyboard shortcuts? They are absolutely useful, here is a list for the default mode (called emacs mode): + Did you know your shell has keyboard shortcuts? They are quite useful. Here is a list for the default mode ("emacs mode"):

- The shell can also be used in vi mode but this I keep it for another webzine issue. + The shell can also be used in vi mode, but this I'll save for another webzine issue.

diff --git a/issues/issue-6/70_LINKS.html b/issues/issue-6/70_LINKS.html index 8cd68fa..78ffb22 100644 --- a/issues/issue-6/70_LINKS.html +++ b/issues/issue-6/70_LINKS.html @@ -6,6 +6,6 @@
    • -
  • (the author started using OpenBSD and tells how it goes)
    • +
  • (the author narrates experiences with a new installation of OpenBSD)
    • diff --git a/issues/issue-6/80_ARTWORK.html b/issues/issue-6/80_ARTWORK.html index ac3daea..49448af 100644 --- a/issues/issue-6/80_ARTWORK.html +++ b/issues/issue-6/80_ARTWORK.html @@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
    -

    Artworks of the moment

    +

    Artwork of the moment

    A hand drawn puffy with a headset and a small floating heart on its right. It's labelled Puffones. + alt="A hand drawn puffy with a headset and a small floating heart on its right. It's labeled Puffones." />
    "End of year gifts." by
    diff --git a/issues/issue-6/95_REDACTION.html b/issues/issue-6/95_REDACTION.html index 34296a0..eb597b6 100644 --- a/issues/issue-6/95_REDACTION.html +++ b/issues/issue-6/95_REDACTION.html @@ -2,6 +2,6 @@

    Note from the editorial team

    - Hi, first I'd like to share my best wishes to everyone for 2022. I've been in touch with a few people willing to translate the webzine into other languages, this is absolutely great but at this time the way the webzine is built can't handle translations. I'll have to work on this to make the translations possible. I have been very busy in December, I did not have much time to work on this issue and this is noticeable both in delay and content, but at the same time the OpenBSD project has been quite quiet for the period. + Hi, first I'd like to share my best wishes to everyone for 2022. I've been in touch with a few people willing to translate the webzine into other languages, this is absolutely great but at this time the webzine's workflow does not handle translation. I'll have to work on this to make the translations possible. I have been very busy in December; I did not have much time to work on this issue and this is noticeable both in delay and content, but at the same time the OpenBSD project has been quite quiet for the period.

    diff --git a/issues/issue-6/99_AUTHORS.html b/issues/issue-6/99_AUTHORS.html index f78d1fc..e3c1401 100644 --- a/issues/issue-6/99_AUTHORS.html +++ b/issues/issue-6/99_AUTHORS.html @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@

    Authors

    -

    Solène Rapenne, Vincent Finance, prx, pamela@ and eventual people who contributed outside of git that I may have forgotten. Many thanks to everyone involved and supportive to the idea!

    +

    Solène Rapenne, Vincent Finance, prx, pamela@ and other people who contributed outside of git that I may have forgotten. Many thanks to everyone involved and supportive of the idea!