From 808e7ffc7d1df9b16085d683c3ea64f5d617662a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: pamela <pamela@openbsd.org>
Date: Thu, 11 Nov 2021 00:02:00 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] proofread issue 4

---
 issues/issue-4/10_HEADLINES.html | 6 +++---
 issues/issue-4/40_INTERVIEW.html | 4 ++--
 issues/issue-4/50_TIPS.html      | 2 +-
 issues/issue-4/80_ARTWORK.html   | 2 +-
 4 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/issues/issue-4/10_HEADLINES.html b/issues/issue-4/10_HEADLINES.html
index 4e66021..0ea5561 100644
--- a/issues/issue-4/10_HEADLINES.html
+++ b/issues/issue-4/10_HEADLINES.html
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
 <h2>TL;DR</h2>
 <ul>
     <li>xterm mouse support disabled</li>
-    <li>four erratas for 7.0-stable</li>
-    <li>wayland makes it place into the ports tree</li>
-    <li>lot of hardware setup news</li>
+    <li>four errata for 7.0-stable</li>
+    <li>wayland makes its way into the ports tree</li>
+    <li>lots of hardware setup news</li>
 </ul>
 </article>
diff --git a/issues/issue-4/40_INTERVIEW.html b/issues/issue-4/40_INTERVIEW.html
index d704703..4b8e20a 100644
--- a/issues/issue-4/40_INTERVIEW.html
+++ b/issues/issue-4/40_INTERVIEW.html
@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
 <div class="puffies" aria-hidden="true">🐡🐡🐡</div>
 <h2>Interview</h2>
 
-For this issue <strong>thfr@</strong> accepted an short interview for the webzine, this was the opportunity to know more about him and his work on OpenBSD.
+For this issue, <strong>thfr@</strong> agreed to a short interview for the webzine, giving us an opportunity to learn more about him and his work on OpenBSD.
 
-<h3>Could you introduce yourself shortly?</h3>
+<h3>Could you introduce yourself briefly?</h3>
 <blockquote>
     <p>I'm in my late 30's as of the time of this interview. I'm a German expat living in the United States with my wife and 2 wonderful cats called Starbuck and Moxie. My second favorite hobby is probably snowboarding. I like to think that I'm probably the first and only OpenBSD developer who works as a physician in their dayjob...</p>
 </blockquote>
diff --git a/issues/issue-4/50_TIPS.html b/issues/issue-4/50_TIPS.html
index 6ac8c6b..8910dca 100644
--- a/issues/issue-4/50_TIPS.html
+++ b/issues/issue-4/50_TIPS.html
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <article id="tips">
 <div class="puffies" aria-hidden="true">🐡🐡🐡</div>
 <h2>Shell tips</h2>
-<p>With default ksh settings, you can type and validate "<code>r</code>" to repeat the last command.  This is actually an alias to "<code>fc -s</code>" as you can notice by typing "<code>type r</code>" in your shell. </p>
+<p>With default ksh settings, you can type and validate "<code>r</code>" to repeat the last command.  This is actually an alias to "<code>fc -s</code>" as you can observe by typing "<code>type r</code>" in your shell. </p>
 </article>
diff --git a/issues/issue-4/80_ARTWORK.html b/issues/issue-4/80_ARTWORK.html
index 80fd347..c72247b 100644
--- a/issues/issue-4/80_ARTWORK.html
+++ b/issues/issue-4/80_ARTWORK.html
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <a href="images/artwork-issue4.gif">
     <picture>
         <img src="images/artwork-issue4.gif"
-         alt="An animated picture featuring a cartoon happy puffer fish typing fast on a laptop keyboard with a bubble text showing 0 and 1 scrolling indefinitely." />
+         alt="An animated picture featuring a cartoon happy puffer fish typing quickly on a laptop keyboard with a bubble text showing 0 and 1 scrolling indefinitely." />
     </picture>
     </a>
     <figcaption>