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I'm here! The flat is just mass, so big. I picked the score bed
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which is twice the size of mum's and it shakes too. You clack the
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wall and it shakes and shakes for minutes. Hah! Why even? It's
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just French as damn.
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Without the girls everything is quiet-like so I can hear the
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shakes and just lie in it till I skid out.
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Ick. Ezri just tried my pad, but she can sweat it. If she sides
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with traitors she can just.
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Neverwise that guz. I'm fab ruggd Mannerheim ready and off to see
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it all. There's a party house with old sportsballs the next pod
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down and I can smell the tar-bones from here, sweet damn. My mouth
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is gushing. Oh, that means I'm really hungry and the smell is
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good. Once I'm stoked up tight I'm skidding up all the way.
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{{Surface adventures for a lifetime}} they say. My tram isn't
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ruggd for it, but the rents aren't much. 'Sidewise, the ruggd
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trams don't come in red like my booboo. She's razzy. I call her
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boo, but I'm still on about the name. One lun it'll come.
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The pad face has status glows above that look like brows. 'makes
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the whole face look like a person-face! It's a total squee,
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earnest. Mum didn't go in for the beat subs, so I just have what
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I keep on my pad, but it's still great. I've got most everything
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already and it's pretty much Aims M. and Olla or reps agains
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anywise. They're score razzy bodies. I've got their book on my pad
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too. Olla is a poet and the musicwriter. Aims M. helps wee bits on
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bit, but mostly she's beats and vocsounds. Love her still.
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Last year at Sundavell Aims M. and Olla played beats with the orig
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classy Radish Slaw (cept the drummer who passed in that tram
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crash). Aims M. did runs and ate that up so vibe. I have it on my
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pad and just put it up. Total wicks guz that, but it's all I got.
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I didn't skid but I wish hard it was truth. The show didn't save
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past live, so it's ephemerial. You know?
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Ezri's da sent her and her bro (who doesn't even get deep into
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them). Her da is flush so they do whatever. I told her she should
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drag me out, but her da had none of it. Ezri said they hit some
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classy tracks which they never, ever do cause Olla says {{the old
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you is dead each day}} which is damn truth. Worst is Erzi didn't
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know which cause she's shit and not deep into them like your Emmi
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here. I just suss they played the Canticles suite! I can feel it
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bonewise. Tragic as damn.
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picturesque town of Ausix. More importantly, she was going to see
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and old friend.
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#
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The late morning air was warm despite the spray of salt water. The
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ferry inched along toward the harbor against a determined wind,
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forcing her to squint at the wooden homes peeking through the
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different now? She pushed it away and watched the Ausentia
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mountains creep closer bit by bit.
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Edit: check for pacing, beats, and reference the coke in decisions
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to try the gambling. Make sure this still has the right feel for
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Ausix. Was fear the right reaction when she got in over her head?
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Did she go far enough to realize that it was her own doing and
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bullheadedness not letting her give up?
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#
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Sinda hesitated at the door and took a deep breath. It's just
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Borzin. Things can't be that different.
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- Event: Sinda finds Borzin in the cottage and friendship is
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rekindled.
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- Function: Introduces Borzin and his "cheater" mentality.
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Establishes the long friendship is still strong.
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- Beginning: Finds Borzin already at the cottage.
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- Function: Introduces Borzin and shows him as tethered to modern
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life, popularity, and importance. Despite this, establish that
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he is still her friend and wants this adventure to work.
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- Beginning: Finds Borzin already at the cottage, talking on the
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phone with his office, which is still reaching out for his help
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despite the vacation. He's distracted and anxious and brusque.
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- Middle:
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- End: Talking late into the night.
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- Pulse: A nervous anticipation. Will they still be friends?
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